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1. Write a short greeting and include the person¡¯s name.
Examples:
Dear __________,
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How¡¯s it going _________?

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2. Write one or two sentences about why the person caught your eye. Try to include a compliment.  Examples:
I saw your profile online and really got a kick. You sound like you have a great sense of humor. I read your profile and really liked your idea of a first date. Especially the part about being able to keep a conversation going.

Hey. Great profile. Sounds like you have a really busy life. You like fly-fishing? And what about the rock climbing thing? Is that for real? I like your photo. Nice smile – looks like you¡¯re having fun. What were you thinking about when you took that? Keep your emails short, light and fun.

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3. Write one or two sentences about what you have in common. Examples:
I completely agree with you about taking a relationship slow. That way you can get to know each other first. My life is pretty busy with outdoor stuff too. I usually go climbing at least once a week.

D. ´Ü¼øÈ÷ Yes/No °¡ ¾Æ´Ï°í ÀÏÁ¾ÀÇ Á¤´äÀÌ ¾ø´Â ±×·± Áú¹®À» Çϼ¼¿ä. ±×¸®°í ÀÚ½ÅÀÇ »ý°¢À» ¾ê±âÇÏ´Â °Ì´Ï´Ù. ABC ¾çÀÇ ÇÁ·ÎÇÊ ¶Ç´Â »çÁøÀÇ ³»¿ë¿¡ Âø¾ÈÇؼ­ ±×°Í°ú ¿¬°üµÇ´Â Áú¹®ÀÔ´Ï´Ù.

4. Ask some kind of open-ended question that requires more than a yes/no answer.
Try to link it to something in the person¡¯s profile. Examples:
You work at a zoo? How does someone get into that profession?
Actually, I like fly-fishing, too. What are your favorite spots?
Sounds like you¡¯re trying to go through a big change. Any plans?
Sounds like you¡¯re really into cars. I¡¯ve been thinking of buying something in the coming months. Any suggestions? You studied Foreign Policy? What do you think about what¡¯s happening right now in _____?
Read the person¡¯s profile closely before you start writing your first email.

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5. Write a friendly closing and your name. Examples (insert your name or Username after each). Cheers, ¡®Til soon, Take care, Feel free to write back any time. I love it when I¡¯ve got mail. Have a great day. Looking forward to hearing more about you.
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